Elmira

When you make a character like this one, which could have been taken from a model, whereas here I haven't copied anything at any time.
You must add details that will make your spectators think that you have thought through your character design well, and that what they will see is not multiple anatomy errors or suggest that you do not know how to draw certain elements.
In addition, you should not give the feeling that you have fatphobia and certainly not offend people.
There is a fairly complicated balance to achieve. I hope I'm not doing too badly here.